*sigh* I was really fucking excited when I saw this come in the portal. I sat there, waiting eagerly, knowing that whatever you made, it was sure to blow my mind and be all around amazing. And it was. At least what I could see.
Please, get rid of the massive watermark. Put one in the corner or something, but come on. That just fucking pissed me off.
I'll go to your site, because your works are worth it, but please, don't do this again.
I fixed it within 5 mins, not quick enough though. Sorry, thanks for the 10 anyway.
Now I want to ride a magical subway through the sky.
Really was a great movie though. Great, vision, great idea. The animation and drawing were slightly messy, but nothing that you can't fix up with some practise, and maybe a tablet, if you don't have one. Anyway though, keep it. I really look forward to your next work. Fav'd, 9'd, and 5'd.
Thanks. I could definitely use a tablet!
Absolutley amazing bro. You've really improved as an animator, even just from the little bit that I've been watching your stuff. So keep it up, bro, I look forward to your next movie.
i have fever, :D !
Graphics were good, keep that up. Voice acting was not the best, like you said. Also, the lip sync was way off at some parts as wer some of the other sounds. Humor was meh. Good video all around, just work on voice acting and/or patience. :P
Certainly was experimental, and made me noglastia like hell.
I really enjoyed this. I think it was a very original idea, one that I've never seen before. The animation was clean and smooth, and I really think you did well.
However, there was no music. Putting in any background music, and sound FX could have bumped you up another point or two. Also, the ending kinda ruined it.
lol the ending was pure lazyness im updating it soon with sounds and probably more sums :)
Considering it was a stick movie, made in pivot no less, it wasn't half bad. If you made it a higher quality video, and maybe learned to spell in your subtitles *wink wink*, you could get a high score.
I would absolutley love to see what you could do with some real software, and some quality sounds.
I would like to see a bit of an increase in the art side, but the animation is fairly smooth. Maybe some music and a little more story next time? Anyway, keep it up.
It had good drawing, but your animation leaves something to be desired. So work on animating smoother, maybe add a bit more to your animations in way of story, etc. and you'll have a high scoring Flash in no time.
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